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LATITUDES, 4th EDITION
​Poetry  

In The Lychee Orchard
​by Michael Foley

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             IN THE LYCHEE ORCHARD
                  for Robert Watkins
 
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Michael—can you
stand your ground 
against a boar? 
 
I laugh knowing it’s not quite a joke
you’ve invited me to gather lychees
 
we’re sitting in your old white truck
at the end of your own hidden road
talking about the three levels of existence
you discovered in a Bolivian museum
 
dark red wine runs through our veins
you sweep your arm out in front of you
taking the orchard in like a hula dance
as if this were the most glorious level
the trees you’d planted in this gulch
perfectly pruned canopies within reach
 
Ah! I love this mist!
This is what happens!
Now it’s going to rain!
 
If a gentle rain’s
the same as a blessing
what’s a hard rain?
the ordinary is extraordinary
your free arm’s out the window
shirtsleeve well-soaked
 
you turn on the headlights
and we careen down into the gulch
through the downpour
fishtailing in wet grass
our descent a wild joyride
front end bucking
lights criss-crossing
you laughing full-on
why wouldn’t I trust 
the best doctor I’d ever known?
his driving his knowledge of the road unseen
and yet I grab the wine bottle by the neck
tighten my knees for the sloshing glass in my crotch
and open the window on my side
so I can breathe
 
once we’re level with the trees
I see the light is leaving us
just enough to see the lychees
through the weeping windshield
hundreds of thousands 
of pinpoints of red fruit
 
we clamber out at the orchard’s edge
beneath canopies layered tightly
all those trees kneeling to the dusk
I stumble in the scent of the rain
pushing past long wet cane grass
 
you disappear trailing instructions
 
If they’re red all ‘round
they’re good!
If they all look good
break the whole thing off!
 
five gallon bucket in hand
I head for the nearest branch
knowing we’re on limited time
up to the point it runs out of light 
heaven can only handle so much color
 
breaking off clusters turns out easier
than singling out one illustrious fruit
 
off to one side I hear something
I stare into the shadows searching
for a shape darker than shadows
skin utterly wet
eyes wide open
I see the silvery leg of a ladder
threading itself through a far tree
I see your head and shoulders
penetrating the topmost canopy
pushing through the second level of existence
meanwhile down below
the lychees you’ve loosened fall
and the erratic percussion of the red fruit
beats against the roof of the underworld
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